小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.He is so shy, but he always speak some jokes to make me happiness. I am proud of the friend. He often play games in the home. In fact, He think that it is funny . He very friendly with other . So He has a lot of friends around the him. I remember his say, "Someday,I will success famous around the world."