小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.He is so shy, but he always say some jokes to make me happiness,So I am proud of him. He often plays games in the home. In fact, He think that it is interest . However, He very friendly with other . So He has a lot of friends .. I remember his say, "Someday,I will success famous around the world."