2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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as we all known,trust is very important for all people ,so many things need us keep trusting others but nowadays people just can't trust others any more ,all they want to trust is money and how to get it . people need trust ,why? if there is no one trust on others ,many things just can't do well any more ,such as many business