2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

A smile can shorten the distant between people The Terea once said,"Some time you smile at someone,it is an action of love,a gift of to person,a beautiful thing."It is smile that melts the indifference or hostility between people,that gives power to those who are at the edges of despair,that brings friends more closely to each other.In a word,it is smile that continuously shorten the distant between people. Smile,with its stronger power,brings out its miraculous glamour in different ways.When you are at the edges of despair,a smile from others can console you hurting heart.When you get into unfamiliar circumstances,a smile will make other people around you feel comfortable and help you willingly.When you fall down,a smile from you friends will give you power to stand up.Where there is no smile,there is no happiness in our life. Seen from the discussion above,a smile benefits us very much.Let us keep smiling so that better communication between people can be promotes and more harmonious society can be built.