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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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from the chart we can know the unemployment rate in 2011 with education is lower or higher,and with educational higher earning more than educational lower.educational decides to earning to a large extent.from the date doctoral degree is most earning,further lower professional degree,then,master's degree,bachelor's degree,associate degree ,some college no degree,high school diploma,in the last is less than high school diploma . It is universally accepted that have a high education is a good choose,in a fact that it is true.it goes without saying that education can rise the earning.more and more people go to the univercity ,they are aim at more earning .and have a happy family ,so they are feel happiness .on the contrary have a high education is parents's hope in the world,this children is usually play a show family importance role in neiberghod's eyes.so they have to study hard ,but this cause of more and more univercity students,they are unemploree . To my mind every students should have a cake ,the company must not look around the lower educational students in a eye,else everyone have to study hard and have single cake,so you will emplornee .
