考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；文章用词灵活多样，学术词汇使用也比较准确。

When seeing the conflict concerning the advantages and disadvantages of the text message which caused by two groups of folks,if we think hard enough,we can learn lucidly that the not uncommon phenomenon that there is no doubt that text message are getting increasing popular and playing an increasingly important role in our life.When it comes to text messages,small wonder,people's view vary from one to another and some citizens maintain that they are a blessing,while others advocate that they are a hell. I would not go that far however,I am in favor of the former view and contend that text message are a blessing.Probably,we have no better way to appreciate it than by studying the three influential factors.In the first place,in festivals,we can send text messages to wish good luck to relatives,friends as well as some acquaintances,which promote understanding and friendship.In addition,we can subscribe to weather forecast,news and other services,with which inhabitants'life will be greatly enriched and getting more convenient.Finally,in the final analysis,it is as the economic further develops and the procedure of industrialization advances that the text message enables the users to be kept informed of the outside world and keep up with the progress of the world. Although so many merits hold the tex message that an increasingly number of residents intend to use it,it cannot be denied that text messages do have some unfavorable aspects.Nevertheless,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that as long as people have a right attitude and make good use of it,it will surely benefit us in more than one way.