2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

With the shift development of science and technology,computer plays a more and more important role.People create computers and same times computers assist us.But what's the real relationship between people and computer.because everything has two sides.people always treat one thing by different ways. It can't be deny that computer with the Internet change the world.Science and the technology are helping economy's development,and computer is the big momentum.Computer not only helped people on works,but also on music,movies,novels and games.Those influence bring a large business.but some people also disagree the computer is good.Because nowadays,the Internet safe is a big problem,people will expose their private information and not aware about it,it's terrible and dangerous. As far as i'm concerned,computer is a thing not good or bad,we should use it by right way,we should keep the relationship of "computer and people" balanced.We create computer to make our world more convenient not to be a weapon against us.