2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段。

On Excessive Packaging Nowadays,more and more commodities pay attention in their package.But also on excessive packaging.The season why producer pay attention in package is that consume saw the apperence of product when they decided to buy .Apperence take an important part in good whether would appeal to consume.On the other hand,most of commodities'quality depend on their apperence because people see the package at first impression not their quality. In my opinion,I think a commodity on excessive packaging is make no sense.Excessive packaging not only would increase cost of a commodity,but also it is too waste materior and destory inviornment.Therefore,I advise package is not require excessive packaging,with a simple package is OK.Simple will be more convenient and flexible than complex.what's more,it is more environmrntal.