2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇基础挺好，能灵活使用部分学术词汇，但词汇拼写要再接再厉；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

One say:"give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four hours sharpening the axes"by Abraham Lincoln.He want to tell us that preparation is play a essenital role in the way to success.If you have sufficient preparation,the way to success wi become easier. There are son many example s can justify this point.Such as Madame Curie,Sima Qian and Edison.If the don't have sufficient preparation,they maybe would hadn't been succeed.Therefore,preparation is the necessary thing you must do when on the way to get success.Only have you prepareed everything that you need, you canachieve the goal faster ande more precise.Somebody may think that preparation is the unnecessary thing,but they ignore the nital fact that the sharper axe can chop down more tree. AS far as I am concerned,preparation is the essential thing when we achieve success.Have a sufficient preparation means the half of success,and anytime you face to challenge you can solve it easily.