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The growing tendency that college students testing for getting certificates envolves into a craze.However,the purpose for seeking a certificate ,people vary from one another.Some hold the view that many certificates you have ,more opportunities accessing to a good job will be.While some others maintain that the process that prepareing for a certificates will push you to acquire some certain acabability,which can parlay ourselves qualifications. As far as college students concerned,we are supposed to be rational when it comes to testing for certificates.For the sake of a plenty of time that prepareing for the test will spend are to be wasted,we should think about it deeply,and make some choice in what certificates is favor of our job career.Thus,we can focus our attention to the wright thing and can be down-to-earth and finally on our road to success.