2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
One say:"give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four hours sharpening the axes"by Abraham Lincoln.He wants to tell us that preparation is play a significant role in the way to success.If you have sufficient preparation,the way to success will become easier. There are so many examples can justify this point.Such as Madame Curie,Sima Qian and Edison.If the don't have sufficient preparation,they maybe wouldn't be successful.Therefore,preparation is the necessary thing you must do when on the way to gain success.Only have you prepared everything that you need, you can achieve the goal faster and more precise.Somebody may think that preparation is the unnecessary thing,but they ignore the vital fact that the more sharp axe can chop down more trees. AS far as I am concerned,preparation is the essential thing when we achieve success.Have a sufficient preparation means the half of success,and anytime you face a challenge you can solve it easily.