2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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There is no denying the fact that no one can easily to success,puting the successful experiences for example,we can find that some preparation should be made before want to do something,maybe these can bring us a smooth way to have a successs,as Abraham Lioncoln's famous proverb said that "Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four sharping the axe." However,how to have a preparation?To begin with ,we should made some feasible plans to this issue, these can make us to take more invisiable factors into consideration.Then according the fact , the best way should be choosed to take measures,as the thing goes on,some detail process should be cared for.Last but not the least,in order to success ,solving the problem we faced as soon as possible is essential, this mainly decide whether the way you success easy or not. As far as I am concered ,there are a lot of ways to lead to success,we should choose the best way which is suit for us, a propriate methord largely contributes to one's success.Do everything needs our strive, if we can ,the success may not far away from us