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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3007
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中句式变化多样,同时从句使用很棒;作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

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There is no denying the fact that no one can easily to success,puting the successful experiences for example,we can find that some preparation should be made before want to do something,maybe these can bring us a smooth way to have a successs,as Abraham Lioncoln's famous proverb said that "Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four sharping the axe." However,how to have a preparation?To begin with ,we should made some feasible plans to this issue, these can make us to take more invisiable factors into consideration.Then according the fact , the best way should be choosed to take measures,as the thing goes on,some detail process should be cared for.Last but not the least,in order to success ,solving the problem we faced as soon as possible is essential, this mainly decide whether the way you success easy or not. As far as I am concered ,there are a lot of ways to lead to success,we should choose the best way which is suit for us, a propriate methord largely contributes to one's success.Do everything needs our strive, if we can ,the success may not far away from us

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