2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；采用了一些简单的从句；文中词汇表达多样性要加强，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段。

This picture depicts an authentic sence of the way that college students choice reading materials.Form this picture we can find that most students choose newspapers,this rate on all student about 44 precent.About 22 precent students prefer magezines,and 18 students like reading fictions.Only 16 students choose reading textbook. As far as my concrened,the reason why most students perfer newpapers because it is convinent and truth.We can reading newspaper while take a trip on the train.