2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；可以适当增加副词的使用。

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