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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3004
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错。

用户练习作文:

No one can deny the fact that no one can easily succeed,putting the successful experiences for example,we can find that some preparation should be made before want to do something,maybe these can bring us a smooth way to have a success,as Abraham Lincoln's famous proverb said that "Give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe." However,how do we prepare it.To begin with,we should make some possible methods to this issue, these can make us to take elements into consideration.Then, according to the fact, the best way should be chosen to take measures,and as the thing goes on,some detail should be cared for.Last but not least,in order to succeed,it is essential to solve the problem which we faced as soon as possible, this mainly decide whether the way you succeed easily or not. As far as I am concerned,there are a lot of ways to lead to success,we should choice the best way which is suit for us, an appropriate method largely contributes to one's success.Doing everything needs our striving, if we can,the success may not far away from us.

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