2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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This picture depicts an authentic sense of the way that college students choice to read materials.Form this picture we can find that most students choose newspapers,this rate on all student about 44 precent.About 22 precent students prefer magazines,and 18 students like reading fictions.Only 16 students choose to read textbook. As far as my concerned,the reason why most students perfer newspaper because it is convenient and truth.We can read newspaper while take a trip on the train.