2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Whatever study or work,a strong will takes an important role in success.In other ways,a strong will is the most important insurance of success. Person who will finish their great mission must with a strong will.As a worker,we would have not achieved thire goal and get a high grade if we haven't a strong will.When someone don't have a strong will and don't study study hard.Drift along day by day.As a result,he will never achieve his aim. Not just a worker,but also a student.If we didn't study hard,and negative when we met some trouble.therefore,we will never become a useful person.In summary,nothing succeeds without a strong will.