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托福独立写作模拟题:关于宠物

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:28浏览次数:717
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
Read and think about the following statement:

Pets should be treated like family members.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.

题目讲解

本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 宠物可以陪伴老人打发寂寞。
2、 把宠物作为家庭成员对待,可以培养喜欢宠物的孩子爱心。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

pets should be our family members,that's my opinion. animals just like humanity,they have life like us.they are our partners of life.we need them.nowadays ,people face many problems and stresses from work,environment society,education home marriage etc. how deal with these problems .who can help us release these stresses .when we feel lonely,when we alone ,who's our friends? the answer is ,animals ,pets .when we are sad ,they company with us ,that can relieve ,reverse such bad feelings.when our body has some pains ,ills ,they can give us helps.for example: it's a true story,a dog saved its owner's life.its owner lived oneself,he was no children and elderly.

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