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Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具，满足舒适的生活已经足够。
词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；请注意分段。
i should say money is very important to us,no money means no life.but money is everything .i don't think so. surely,in current ,i you are rich,you will have more quality life than poor people. you may be have villa,have many servants ,you can afford highest hotel ,you have a lot of money for travelling,entertainment,anything if you want you can owned .that's true.but money is just a thing can imporve our life ,but can not do anything.we are emotional animal,we need affection,lover .these can not buyed by money.even if you owned more money then you may live a comfortable life,but ,if you only have money and no family no one love you,you are also called poorer
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