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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:998
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,the dishonest phenomena are everywhere,and you can't find out an honest person around,all you heard are lies.He who lies to you won't flash when he faces to face with you.The lies are not so good for anyone,and they are very harmed to the society,and they also can break the relationship with friends. We should not lie to other people,because the lies are harmful.And the reason why we should not lie are because:First,lying is not a good way to keep a relationship with others,and which will be lost trust to others.Second,lying will be the way to grave,which will lead us to exterminate,then we will lose everything.And the third,lying is a way convey to other people that you are not an honest person,and then they won't to make fiends with you any more. In my opinion,I think we should be honest to other persons.As you know,the relationships' important part is trust,so we can't lie to others,and that is no right.If we want to constitute a warm and happy society,then we should be honest.

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