作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;文中衔接词丰富;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
With the development of society,the competition between people is becoming increasingly fierce.A growing number of people are enthusiastic about various certificates。What is more,the phenomenon seems to be a prevalent trend. Why do they keen on it?People’ purpose vary from person to person;some of them hold the view that it is the certificate that enhance the opportunity to find a decent job;others maintain the opinion that through the exam,it can absolutely enrich their life,broaden their horizon,diversify their skill as well as improve their comprehensive quality. From my perspective,just as the old saying goes that every coin has two sides,we should treat it overall.On the one hand,it contributes to our development in the future;on the other hand,we may exhaust excessive time and energy.Consequently,we should get it selectively.