2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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There is a increasing rate on excessive packaging. In fact ,a lot of beautiful brands do not deserve that much money for which we pay. The reasons that explain this phenomenon are as follow. On the one hand ,as seller , they pack their brand several times so as to raise the price ,which would bring more benefit. On the other hand , as more and more people become rich,they want to buy some brand that look more high-end,even though they are more expansive. From the point of my perspective ,excessive packaging is a way of wasting material ,energy and time.more packaging does not add the brand's value.So in order to keep more to our generation we should stop packing brand too much.