初中英语命题作文真题演练(18):My family

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My family is very lovely. We have three member,my father,my mother and me.Dad is an English teacher.Mom is a math teacher.The are very busy and start work at 7 o'clock,and go home at 6 o'clock. My favorite is Saturday because i can stay in home with my mom and dad