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单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
My family There are three people in my family，my father，my mother and I．My father is an English teacher and my mother is a math teacher．They often go to work at seven in the morning and get home at six． My favorite day is Saturday because I can stay at home with my parents。I love them very much．
