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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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How to succeed in a job interview interviewing takes an important role in the job interview .because not only it is very easily knew about you for the interviewees,but also can reflect a part of the interviewers' circumstances. How do the interviewers succeed in a job interview? In my opinion,firstly,what the most important factor is the interviews' wearing.for the reason that interviewee can how the interviewer judging from the interviewer' appearance.Secondly,the language skill is of importance.the interviewee usually consider the level of the interviewers through a short face to face interview.especially for the communicating society .Thirdly,except for the aboved factors ,the successful interview owes to the major、knowledge 、attitude and confidence and so on. As far as I am concerned,when in the interview,the interview should be confident interviewing with interviewee,that can give a good impression of the interviewee.Last but not least, the interviewer had better prepare well all the things that interviewee needs.

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