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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46218
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the histogram, we can learn that people's income increases along with their education levels. Overall, we can see that the incomes of the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. The phenomenon can be chased down the fact: the high education can bring the high incomes. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don't think so because, on the one hand, the world is full of technologies, people can earn more money from their technologies, and many people learn the technologies from the Factories, college, etc, since they graduated from high school. On the other hand, the students who graduated from higher degrees will paying the twice or more of money to get those degrees, but doesn't earn the twice of the incomes. In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate's ability and learning habit.

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