题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays,computer science developed very quickly.A lot of man's activities are accomplished by robots. Obviously,computer is the brain of the robot.Meanwhile,a huge number of people need to use computer to achieve their works in the internet. We find a truth that man could not leave our computer.However computer need more prominent programmer to inject new fresh blood.So from where I stand , man and computer had became a couple of good friends. As a famous saying goes,"every coin has two sides".Not only computer can bring us some many benefits ,but it also produce some problems.For example , some students are addicted in games or often scan some adult web.