2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

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with the development of the economy ,our lives has improved .most people have the ability to buy more things ,the behavior of waste is more and more serious in the college campus.the behavior of waste is bad and is harmful for us .first ,our resource is rare and this behavior make our earth burden more and more ,second ,making money is hard for many parents and it will waste money you mother hard to make ,third ,this behavior expressed that you are not a good people and may let the excellent people look down at you ,so it's important to stop this behavior and take actions ,we ourselves should do it first and spread the knowledge of the harm of waste to let other people join to stop the behavior of waste