2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者词汇表达不够灵活，但有些单词拼错了；适当丰富句式；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

my views on online shopping Now a days online shopping was to be a fashion.More and more people shopping online. Online shopping has many benefits,firstly online shopping is so convenient to people,they did't go out buy something,Courier will get to the home.The second people could buy something any country，they did't to go aborad tast food,buy goods.And so on.....but online shopping has a lot of problems.Online has many crooks. On my view,If we want to buy goods that we must konw about sellers credibility.we can see somebody who buy that goods' advice.we can do reference.