2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Nowadays,more and more parents send their kids to art classes in order to upgrade their children's ability.Some people hold a positive attitude towards this agreement.They insist that art classes can help kids to learn more knowledge and practical skills outside the school life.What's more,compared with other kids,you will fall behind them if you don't join any classes. However,others have an opposite attitude on it.They argue that children ought yo have a wonderful childhood instead of art classes.It's found that many children were not interested in some art classes which only bring more burden for them. In my view, I support the point that parents should send their kids to art classes.It's no doubt that kids join the art classes can learn more knowledge and borden their scene.But most importantly ,parents should respect their children's choice before sending them go to art class.