2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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How many people will succee in same class?And why so difference in the same class?The same teachers and same education ways that some students fail to go university,but others gain good achivement.Why are they fortune so distinct?The answer is that some of them would be succeed because of they never give up,they have strong will.It's successful importan guarantee. And then,the finish of great mission that person of strong will could to do it.No matter ancient or today,in spite of international or home,all can't do it without strong will. The same with us,as a student that eventually become a talent if no study hard.