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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1943
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of over-consuming is becoming fierce than that before,the rapid development of the economy enriches our life that makes us for more demands of goods. The waste's damage is very harmful to our life and environment,we would not like to see this situation that waste is everywhere. Not only does this influence our affections,but also we should have a deep thought that we also have a lot of people in starvation.If we have a good habit of no waste,we can give these to people who need it and help others.What's more,waste threatens to exhaust our resource and spoil our environment,measures should be taken by the government as soon as possible. In order to avoid wasting,we should do first from ourselves and have a good habit of saving.Also ,our government is advocating ideas of "conservation-reminded society" and sustainable development,whether due to sense of guilt about waste,or a simple desire to save money,we need to promote sustainable consuming.

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