2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
字数:150满分:100分
拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Should One Except a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? In china,the March is the month of learning Leifeng,who is a integrity man, and constantly did a good deed but not to expect a reward.He is our admiral hero.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards Leifeng?Definitely not,as to this issue,opinions vary from person to person.For those who hold the opinion that Doing a good deed should get a reward claim that,firstly,It is not our obligation about doing a good deed;secondly,in the contemporary,someone enthusiasticly help others,but get a unexpected result.For instance,A good child help a old woman who fell down to stand up,while the woman claim that the child knocked her down.According to the mentioned above,someone adhere to consider that doing a good deed should be afford a reward. However,others maintain that expecting a reward when doing good things is should′t.They insist on doing like Leifeng.First and foremost,they emphasize that it will influence the harmonious of our society and even result severe consequences if we hope for reward before doing a good thing.Moreover,when we are doing a good deed,our body and mind become satisfaction. Seen from the mentioned above,If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions,I,doubtless,stand by the idea that doing a good deed should not expect a reward.In the one hand,it might be denied in many thing if we have reward in mind first.For example,A person suddenly get a hurting-heart on the street,if you do not to assist him,they may die.In the other hand,for a poor man,he could not afford reward to you when you help him.Accordingly,we should do a good deed without asking reward.