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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6290
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。

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With the profound changed in our society, we are tending to distrust each other. We are subjected to lots of frauds and lies in our life. And there are always lots of coverage of negative events on the newspaper.For example, one guy helped the old stand up,who had wrestled on the ground.surprisingly,the old who should originally thank the guy lavishly, charged the warm heart for a compensation with the reason of pushed by him . More than one events likes the above event has been happened in contemporary society.At the stake of being cheated,people are prone to be indifferent. From my perspective,we hold responsibilities to deliberate on the issue.Without the trust between man and man,we will be denied a stable and prosperous society.We should make it plain to the public that we have no other choices but to rebuild the trust among public.

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