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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4570
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

With development of society,people get information more efficient and quick.We can learn at home in front of computer instead of going to school.Lots of business trades were complished on the internet every day. All above are distributed to the widly use of internet. But some of you may have a question:is the internet always bring us advantages?Abviously, The answer is no.Just as every coin has two sides.Internet also brings us bad effects.There are many heckers on the internet who will heck into your computers,stole your privite information.what's worse,after stole your informations,those heckers using them to commit crime.That will cause damages. In my point of view,we should take good use of internet.Don't let the internet take place of interpersonal communication.

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