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作者词汇基本功很好，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；句式变化多样；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
Warm and soft, in the cartoon is a smilling lamp who radiates light and heat, becoming brighter where it is darker and symbolizing that love is the most desires to those in adverse circumstances. Among all the noble emotions of our mankind, love is the one suspended at the top of list. To the one in trouble, love seems to be a god-blessed present. A case in point is the Project Hope, a program plays a key role in helping children—can't afford schooling—to continue their seeking for knowledge. Therefore, no necessity of making a living results in lack of education, which, many of people believe that a man without education deprive of one of the greatest twentieth-century opportunities and will be end of an unfortune victim of competitive circumstances. Another exemplification coming to my mind is the warm-hearted humanity aid in Wenchuan earthquake, flooding into the disaster area from around the world, including mountains of relief materials and crowds of volunteers. When it comes to covey love, a famous saying goes,"Brotherly love is fall all human beings.", which means what really matters is not the method you choose to express love, but the very tolerance and solicitude you possess to your surroundings. In addition, it is a obligation binding to all that draging those who in a hole out of the morass of despair. Only in this way, can we live in a more harmonious and peaceful way both physically and mentally.
