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作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；全文结构较为严谨。
Warm and soft, in the cartoon is a smiling lamp who radiates light and heat, becoming brighter where it is darker and symbolizing that love is the most desires to those in adversities. Among all the noble emotions of our mankind, love is the one suspended at the top of the list. To the one in trouble, love seems to be a god-blessed present. A case in point is the Project Hope, a program plays a key role in eduction, helping the children who can't afford schooling to continue their seeking for knowledge. Therefore, no necessity of making a living results in lack of education, which, many of people believe that a man without education deprive of one of the greatest twentieth-century opportunities and will be end of a unfortune victim of competitive circumstances. Another exemplification coming to my mind is the warm-hearted humanity aids in Wenchuan earthquake. They are flooding into the disaster area from around the world, including mountains of relief materials and crowds of volunteers. When it comes to covey love, a famous saying goes,"Brotherly love is fall all human beings.", which means what really matters is not the method you choose to express love, but the very tolerance and solicitude you possess to your surroundings. In addition, it is the obligation binding to all that dragging those who in a hole out of the morass of despair. Only in this way, can we live in a more harmonious and peaceful way both physically and mentally.
