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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写方面要认真；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
From:hubin@163.com Date:Dec.7 2013 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:To establish business relationship Dear Sir or madam I knew you the new product of No.5679 during the exhibition center held in Dec.15 to Dec.22.I am very interested in it.Please send us a price list and a instruction.We are looking forward to establish business relationship with you Yours sincerely hubin
