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With the tremendous development of technology and society, the computer has popularized in our daily life.Comparing with interpersonal communication in real life,A growing proportion of people prefer communicating via the internet.This phenomenon has turned into a social problem,which aroused public concern. Although we can never deny the convenience of online communication,that step over the distance and space, we have to admitted that online communication lead to the ignorance of interpersonal communication in reality.We come to terms with the fact that virtual world is intangible and unreal.What's more,there are hiding more frauds,who sitting behind the computer,clicking on the mouse,tying on the keyboard,bullies others without holding responsibilities,than communicating in reality. From my perspective,we should deliberate on the issue.On one hand, online communication can be made full of used,while communication in reality costs too much.On the other hand,we need to attach adequate importance to interpersonal communication in reality,which reveals one's true feelings better and promotes affection between humans.
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