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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4561
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分89.5分
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

用户练习作文:

With the tremendous development of technology and society, the computer has popularized in our daily life.Comparing with interpersonal communication in real life,A growing proportion of people prefer communicating via the internet.This phenomenon has turned into a social problem,which aroused public concern. Although we can never deny the convenience of online communication,that step over the distance and space, we have to admitted that online communication lead to the ignorance of interpersonal communication in reality.We come to terms with the fact that virtual world is intangible and unreal.What's more,there are hiding more frauds,who sitting behind the computer,clicking on the mouse,tying on the keyboard,bullies others without holding responsibilities,than communicating in reality. From my perspective,we should deliberate on the issue.On one hand, online communication can be made full of used,while communication in reality costs too much.On the other hand,we need to attach adequate importance to interpersonal communication in reality,which reveals one's true feelings better and promotes affection between humans.

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