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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
熟练使用了一些长难句;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name:Li Ming___________ Sex:____Male______ Date of birth: June 15th.1986 Marital status:___Single________ Job objective :Foreign trade clerk Education background:I graduated from Enlish department ,Beifang University in 2008 Personal skills:I have a good command of English.I am skill in listening,speaking,reading and writing.My second foregin language is German and know process of foreign trade Hobbies:I like playing basketball and singing and watch a movie