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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;能够使用一些不错的从句;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name:Li Ming Sex:Male Date of birth: June 15th.1986 Marital status:Single Job objective :Foreign trade clerk Education background:I graduated from Enlish department ,Beifang University in 2008 Personal skills:I have a good command of English.I am skilled in listening,speaking,reading and writing in English.My second foregin language is German and know process of foreign trade Hobbies:I like playing basketball and singing and see a movie