2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

How many people will succee in the same class?And why dose so difference in the same class?The same teachers and same education ways that some students fail to go university,but others gain good achievement.Why are they fortune so distinct?The answer is, some of them would be succeed because of they never give up,they have strong will.It's successful importan guarantee. And then,the finish of great mission that person of strong will could to do it.No matter ancient or today,in spite of international or home,all can't do it without the strong will. The same with us,as a student that eventually become a talent if no study hard.