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I am a middle school student, My name is Tina. I walk to school every day, every morning, I can see a blind man. He is so pool, so I think I must help him. I go to the street, I can see many cars and buses in the street. at a crossing, now I waiting for a blind man. when I arrive the school. I say goodbye to him. I am so happy because I love help people.