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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name:Li Ming Sex:male Date of birth: June 15th.1988 Marital status:Single Job objective foreign trade clerk Education background:I graduated from English department,Beifang University in 2008 and excellent score in all subject Personal skills: I have a command of English.I skilled in listening,speaking,reading,writing in English.My second language is German.I have acquired basic skills in German.I am familiar with process of foreign trade Hobbies:Playing basketball and singing and see a movie