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Nowadays,it is a common social phenomenon that a growing number of people to get some kind of certificate. At first,the College English Test is extremely common.More over,the teacher certificate is also highly hot and so on. My point of view,there are a number of factors contribute to this phenomenon.First and foremost,employment environment increasingly severe.Competition is fierce between job seekers,hence,the certificate can prove someone's ability.Moreover,the certificate is a stepping stone to some companies. As far as I am concerned,if someone's expected work need profession certificate,they must to get the certificate,however should not be over emphasized.