2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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At present,the phenomenon of excessive packaging from the many commersies has aroused heat debate.many of the merchandise were product and delicate by the meanings why does the phenomenon has ?there are the ways to explain and illustrate.firstly ,in term of buyer,in these years ,with the development of the living standard ,only the simplly quantity things is not bring shopper constant.what is more, to obtain the more profit,the maker pay enough attention to packaging ,last but not least, buying the pack things are used by getting others just owing to someone's "face ". As far as i am concerned ,i think it is high time that eliminate the phenomenon.because it is not economical and benefit by everyone .so i argue that the costumes should be concerned about the quantity and boost the spending awareness .in long run, the economical society is a main tendcy.