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2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:24浏览次数:3568
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题目 Creating a Green Campus
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1.建设绿色校园很重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.为了建设绿色校园,我们应该……
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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In the modern world, a green campus is more popular among many universities.A green campus not only brings us a beautiful scenery,but also makes us relaxation.Hence, building a green campus is very important.However ,a green campus not only refers to a green environment,it means that a harmonious campus. Yet,how to build a real green campus ?As far as i'm concerned,we should start from ourself to do what we can to protect our campus environment .First ,paying more attention to our ouself sanitation .Don't throw away rubbish casually.Second, getting along well with our classmates.We should take more care of others .Finally ,we should obey school's rules to build a harmonious campus. All in all ,all students should be involved in creating a green campus .Because the campus has a great influence for students' study,so that we need to try our best to creat a green campus.Only in this way can we live a happy life in the school

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