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2013全国中考英语试题汇编试题(42)写作:Good Ways to Keep Healthy

发布时间:2013-11-08 16:41浏览次数:359[网页划词已开启]
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健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。

短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。

1.fooda balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat…
2.exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games…
3.happinesskeep happy, make friends, smile…
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词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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A healthy life is very importent for us, There are some ideas to help you keep healthy. First, keep your happy every day. you can make friends and then smile to talk with them. They'll fell you are very friendly for them and they 'will smile to you, too. Then, do more exercise. such as take a walk, play ball games and so on. But one more thing, keep them everyday. Last, you must eat more healthy food aren't junk food. eat more fruit and vegetables but eat less meat. Believe that, A good eating hobit will help you. Please start keep healthy before It's too late!

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