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We all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. They can make us laugh but sometimes they can make us sad. I want to tell you a low in my life with my mother. I am so hate my mather because shi is very bad, when I want to watch an Amikcan movie she always says"why do you like watching them. they aren't interesting for you." Oh my God. she says this talk often again and again still I don't watch them. Oh dear me, she always make me don't happy. How can I do!
