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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2126
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
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文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "Learning to get along with our parents" These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. Most of time, we think they are too old for us to talk about school life and classmates. But I think we should always talk to them about these things. It will help your parents to know how to education with our study and life, our parents are like our teachers. So they could know all the things about us. One thing in common for us. Our parents often care our test mark and class. I think It is very hate. But we can't afford that. So, our parents. Please don't care us makes. It's not as impotent as our life. That's all for my speech, thank you!

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